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Reviews For: Falln 2 Darkeness

Haunted Sinner
15-07-2006
ch 1
::The darkness is complete. From it emerges the sensuous, tortured figure of the eternal vampire, who speaks thus::

Ah, that song! It is music to my cold ears. Far be it from me to fault a fellow enjoyer of such wonderful crypt-music! Sometimes I may listen to the gothic strains of Amy Lee for aeons untold.

::With an approving nod, the vampire is gone::
gutsy_gem_iwrya
15-07-2006
ch 1
its good but evanesense is christian rock so u should refer tew that ohterwise ur aThIeSt!!! lol but gd fic.
SparklyStarPrincess382
14-07-2006
ch 1
OMG just ignore those other people! this wwas sooo awesome!! they have absolutly no idea wat a good fic is! this was omg so cool! I LOVE Evenecense!!!1!1
Patron PPC Demi-Goddess
14-07-2006
ch 1
*sighs and pinches the bridge of her nose* You know...when Fanficland made the new archive...I thought we'd have a whole section full of thought out plots...good spelling...good grammar and everything the PPC stands for. *gives an aggravated sigh*

Now, I'm not saying that I am perfect, but...

What happened to the description? You could elaborate a little more, you know? Three extra words won't kill you. Maybe a few extra sentences would have been nice, too. And using the spell check wouldn't have hurt too much either. Is it really that hard to move your goddamn mouse up just a teensy bit so you can check for mistakes? My four year old sister can use spell check for crying out loud!

And another thing...what possessed you to make a songfic? Songifcs are banned! Banned, I say! Plus they don't exactly make that great a fic. What do you think this is...a motion picture?! Songs belong in places where you can actually hear the sound, me bucko.

And just so you know...most PPC agents would NEVER act like that! Ever!

Thank you and I hope you get skewered in your sleep by a mad PPC agent.

Good day.
Huinesoron
14-07-2006
ch 1
U sux!!1 Tahts not evn a storee! i shud reprot u!
ErinsEvilTwin
14-07-2006
ch 1
OMG!! that was soooooo deep and like meaningful and suff.

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