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| Reviews For: Time Compression |
| Janetsgurl
16-07-2006 ch 1 | Well, even though you were really mean about my story, I have to admit this was pretty good. I think it's taking too long to get to the plot, though. You might want to...REWRITE...it. |
| Haunted Sinner
16-07-2006 ch 1 |
::Lightning splits the darkened air, and the eternal vampire appears, glowing for a moment with a dull crimson light, and speaks thus::
A very good story, congratulations. I look forward to reading more... ::A blinding flash, and she is gone:: |
| OuRlOvEcAnTrAnScEnDtImE
15-07-2006 ch 1 | grate fic buut u ned 2 maek it shortor |
| kiwigurl528
15-07-2006 ch 1 | zomg leik, tihs is so goooood and sad at teh same time!!! Whut's gonna happen to poor billy?? (lol, can i call him billy? OK! :DDDD) i hope everything works out for him! rite mor soon, ok??? |
| gutsy_gem_iwrya
15-07-2006 ch 1 | it was ok but ho is shinra, is shinra the mum??? cuz shinra is a boy name unless she's gay lol!!! but william shud have a better name cuz its boring he shoudl b called necrus shade or sumthin. but otherwise its good keep it up!!! |
| Sorceress_Gurl
14-07-2006 ch 1 | OMG that was so sad!! I dont know who agent shinra is but ive played Final fantsay and i know that Rufus shinra is hott is she his daughter??!! i hope so!! Please write more soon or my muses will get yyuo!!!!!!!! |
| Huinesoron
14-07-2006 ch 1 | i dont get it. y is the pPc runied? Has tehre bin a warr? Plz tell me were teh story of tihs warr is writen, i wnat to reed it. kthnx. |