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Reviews For: Agent Lyseaen Kai'loie

MystikalLuvrrRr
12-07-2009
ch 1
I kno there is presedent for Mary Sues to becmore egants of the PPC so i find your stry to tne very likely and not ooc for the PPC. I relly like your charcter and want to see more from her!
vampryegrrl
11-07-2009
ch 1
wOw u r such a gud writr!! she sounds lik a totallly intrestin charachter u shuld writ lots mre about her
Lilith Wydenbrooke
10-07-2009
ch 1
This is a very interesting take on the PPC! And I don't care that Lyseaen seems to be like a MS, she's an interesting character and I hope you'll write more!

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