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| Reviews For: Hiddn feeligns |
| kiwigurl528
15-07-2006 ch 1 | omg taht wuz soooo cute! leto and makes-things r so hott for eachother!!1 rite more, plz!!1 |
| Haunted Sinner
15-07-2006 ch 1 |
::The temperature drops as the eternal vampire appears and speaks thus::
An interesting story, and clearly one in which the partakers are destined for the Underworld. I shall welcome you there, should you take the time to work on your spelling and grammar, for as it is it would burn the eyes of the Dark Lord himself. ::With that last comment, the vampire wraps herself in her onyx cloak and vanishes from this world:: |
| gutsy_gem_iwrya
15-07-2006 ch 1 | omg!!! slahs is wRoNg and ghey is wRoNg!!! omg ahtiest UR GOIN TO HELL!!! |
| OuRlOvEcAnTrAnScEnDtImE
14-07-2006 ch 1 | OMG Makesthingies/leeto iz WRONG!!12121!! |
| Janetsgurl
14-07-2006 ch 1 |
Wow! Neat pairing!
That's a really cool pairing I never thought of before! Excellent! You might want to get a beta, though, just for the spelling & like that. |
| SparklyStarPrincess382
14-07-2006 ch 1 | hi ummm that was good i dont think makes-things is gay tho but it doesnt matter cuz you showed how makes-things is strong you know? but still hes not gay but this was still good ok bye. |