fanficWorld| JayBird -- Action/Romance -- Posted: 15/07/2009 -- Updated: 03/10/2012 |
MystikalLuvrrRr: I'm glad you liked it. And LOL, I tihnk I may Acacacia a bit mroe evil than she really is becaus it made teh story more interesting. As for the months ummm you'l see later (if I keep teht chapter in LOL).
Ellintyra Lloysinthayr: I totaly agree! Tahnk you fory our review.
Lilith Wydenbrooke: Ummmm yea I thought that hackr wouldve given up bu now but aparrently not.
AgafndYou: I cant' tell you if sh'es going to die! Taht would spoil it!
brandywine_baby89: TAhnk you for your review!
Honest Critic: Ummmm thanks? Im' doing what you said and not using mutliple punctuation mars or numberals (except in brandy_baby's name LOL) so hopefully youl'l like taht.
A/N: Okay so tihs is the chapter which is why the story is rated R. Umm if you dont' like that you can skip it.
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Chapter Two - Sweat
As soon as Jaycacia, Jay and the SO arrived in the secluded glade, Jay pulled off her--
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Jay glanced down the first few lines and then screwed the sheet of paper into a ball. "You're enjoying this, aren't you?" she said.
"Oh, absolutely," Acacia agreed. "That's why I came back in time two thousand years, tracked you down in the largest city in the known world, and made you leave your workshop to read the new epic tale of the greatest travesty known to man." She paused for a moment. "Oh, wait, never mind."
Jay glowered at her and plucked another date from the bowl. "You still went and got the second chapter," she accused. "You knew it was going to be bad."
"The whole thing's bad," Acacia said calmly. "You didn't have to bring it here."
"I thought you'd like seeing me again," Jay muttered. "My mistake."
Acacia rolled her eyes. "Of course I do, Jay," she said. "But you don't need a Mary-Sue-shaped excuse to come and visit. Or a date-shaped one," she added, looking at the half-empty bowl next to Jay's chair.
The other woman dropped her hand guiltily, although not before popping one final date into her mouth. "She said I can skip it," she said. "Can I skip it?"
"If you really want to," Acacia allowed. "I checked, and there's nothing plot relevant. You might want to read the last paragraph, though."
"Oh, fine," Jay replied. Picking the page up again, she smoothed it out and read.
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As night began to fall, Jaycacia sat beside her lovers and looked out over the glade. It had been a wonderful few hours, the happiest she remembered, and the prospect of a whole week here made her smile both inside and out. Leaning against the SO's stem while Jay rubbed her feet, she thought about where they might go tomorrow. Little did she know that before the night was over, the peaceful forest would be marred by death.