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Rise of the Elemental Agents
HopeandLove2 -- General -- Posted: 24/09/2014 -- Updated: 26/09/2014
Fire Love of the PPC was mad. The people heal were just so jealous of her amazing talents. She couldn't help it if she was just so much talented and prettier and musical and special and kind and talented and acrobatic and lovely and better then they where. Only her super Hottie boyfriend Mason really understood her (A:n he lok jut like Legolas!!!!!). That awful agent Seych was the worst though. She ran her fingers through her fiery rev hair that followed over het shoulders. Look in the mirror she saw a woman with perfect breasts, Petty sparking bye eyes , and pink lisps. Today she was wearing a hot pink minis it that emhasixed her curbs. She also wore a glittly sliver top that showed off her boobs. Delilah sliver shoes where worsen on de feet. She walked over to her phone and called her best friend Air Winter. (Did you like it? Chaptah to conin mep weak?!!!!?!!!!,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviews
brandywine_baby89
Gr8 story! Fire Love sounds so pretty lol! Wire more!

XOXOX
HopeandLove2
Fank do! Tanks 4 de luvv:) ;) :p :3
LonelyStar
Where are the other three (to fit in with the Classical Elements pattern)?

And, are you continuing this story on Fanfic World?
HopeandLove2
Great idea!!!! Bb Tank up 4 de help
tgrissai
wow omg i lve it shes such a good character! (sorry I no spel god thos wrsd back der mst be aful r smthing)
omg omg i call mason!!!!!!!1!!! hes' sooo hottttt!
~*Iximaz*~
STOP RITING BCUZ U SUCK THIS WAZ A STUPPID STORI N U R STUPPID SO U SHOLD STOP RITING NOW
HopeandLove2
I CAN RIGHT BETTER DEN U. U Tink ur so tuff? Then wight ip bitter.
~*Iximaz*~
FINE I WILL RITE BETTRE!!!1 AND TEN ULL FEEL SO STUPPID HAHAHA
TheGreatDestroyer
I threw up a little.

>rev hair
>legolas boyfiend
>perfect boobs
>bye eyes
>pink lisps
>degenerate clothing

>all of this wish fulfillment


Christ, its like a barbie for adults.


I have a tip for improving your writing. Firstly, locate your computer's power source (battery if its laptop, power cord if desktop). Secondly, pull it out and beat yourself over the head with it. Repeat until to concussed to write any more.
HopeandLove 2
I'll snow you. My agent is perfect. I'll write chapter 2 and it will be the most amazing sing u Evan red in your light.
JayBird
Um so I tryed doing tihs (b/cas I ALLAYS want to imporve my riting) and now my hed herts. I dont' tihnk it umprovd my writng eiter. Whats' congussed meen?
TheGreatDestroyer
compared to you're previous level of intelligence concussion is enlightenment.
Lemony Eggnog
Don't listen to the trolls. Here's my prescription for improved writing:

1. Write. Write some more. After that, keep writing.
2. Read quality published literature of the sort you want to write. Read some more. After that, keep reading.
3. Compare what you read to your own writing. Notice the differences. Figure out what you can do with your writing to make it more like quality literature.
4. Rinse and repeat.

... Okay, I'm not actually saying this just to be nice. I admit, it amuses me to see puffed-up twits like TheGreatDestroyer squirm. >: )

--Lemony