Honest Critic
10-07-2009
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No one read the first one. You didn't get thirty reviews because you didn't deserve them. You didn't even deserve ONE. Your story was cliched, convoluted and OOC. Do you know what that means? "Out of Character." You have no idea what kind of people Sedri and Iza are, and you shouldn't try to understand them. You'll fail. You're not a nice person and you have no grasp on common sense - if you dare to keep criticising slash you're going to end up arrested by social workers because SLASH is the FUTURE. How else are we going to control the world's population problem?
Stop writing. Go and work at McDonald's.
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