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Reviews For: Masquerade of OFUM

AgafndYou
12-07-2009
ch 1
OMG!! Awwww that is sooo sweat!

i woodnt wory Lilith isnt a Mar ySue! good job ths stry ROX!!! :DDDDDDD
Honest Critic
10-07-2009
ch 1
She is a Mary Sue. Deal with it. You can start by re-writing the whole thing.
PrincessxKatricia
10-07-2009
ch 1
Wow. That is such a great story! Don't worry aboyt Lilith. ;) Shes not a Mary Sue if you say so. Lol, but this is so wonderful. You are a amazing wrighter!
MystikalLuvrrRr
10-07-2009
ch 1
this is only ur first story? you are such an mazing riter! i am really jealous. i have written stories before but not as g00d as yours. please keep writing! Lilith is sucha kool haracter! an she deserves to get the best ball evar!
Lady Cyskia
10-07-2009
ch 1
woooow! what a gud st0ry!

aw dat's so cte its luvly 2 see lilith get what she dserves! of course shs not a marysue! urso good @ writin!

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOEREEEEEEEE!

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