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| Reviews For: badcrossover and badslash all i one! |
| Kingflamer
12-07-2009 ch 1 |
Where to begin? I need to think of some accurate manner in which to describe my assessment of this work.
Mystika, if I may call you that, you have created some manner of literary abortion. And not the clean kind. Yours is a bloodied coathanger hanging from the twat of the very art form. I believe my eyes have been sullied. I will disregard your flagrant disregard for the rules of spelling, grammar and consistency for the same reason many disregarded Hitler's parking tickets. They are innumerable and disinteresting in comparison to your other, more blatant flaws. First is the main character of your fic. Mystik? A bland charicature of a character, who I can only assume you based on yourself. Kreep and his bear seem to exist only as foils for her disgusting tomfoolery. The villain or target, while they have yet to be properly introduced, is thus far a half-mentioned background figure who the characters react to with horror in a manner grossly disproportionate to the threat the enemy represents. Also, Faddik is a stupid name. So, in conclusion, please go kill yourself. Sincerely, Kingflamer |
| vampyregrrl
11-07-2009 ch 1 | OMG yr MEEeeeeN!!!!!!11! U shuldn;t b so mEEEEEn she is doin her bes t but evry1 mks som mistaks if u dnt hav NEthing nice 2 sy then dont say it!!111!!!! PS MyskaLuvvrrr i think yr story is Awesum!!! :DDDD |
| Lady Cyskia
10-07-2009 ch 1 | oooo how dare dey tha ts horrid!!!!! no 1 shuld eva pair ahrry wit CHALRIE! how dare dey bring anumecharcters iinto a POTERVERSE FIC! gud on ur agnts 4 takin it on! dos my rview cont 4 2 plzzzz ined moreee! |
| Anon
10-07-2009 ch 1 | Let me put it this way, MystikaLuvrrRr (and what kind of name is that?), you should never have picked up the keyboard. Learn to use spell-check, see what passes for GOOD fiction, and then maybe you can publish your work. Until then I'll thank you not to inflict your imbecilic writing on us. |
| Lilith Wydenbrooke
10-07-2009 ch 1 | New fic? This is a great story; keep it up! :D |