Author: lolkittyking33
i love u (in this world and the next)
Published: 2022/09/03

Once upon a time you were in agents of the ppc. You daw orian jeus. “Omg hes so hot you said to your fiend Polly”

“He is”

then...Orian came over!11

What will happen next. I know its short, I’m sorry!

—lol

Chapter 2

You know what, your an idiot if you flame. Don't like dont read!!!

Hi said Orian. Yur hot.

O MG fanks u say. ''Your hot 2"

"Want to kisss"? he asks.

6u ponder this, knowing that Payh willb jealous when she knows of it.

"of coursr."

You kisz eack other.

More soon!!!

Chapper 4

Every so often, the PPC universe offends me so deeply that I just have to react by folding, spindling, and mutilating it.*

Pay appears!

“ we werent kidding,” you say.

“Oh yea?! ??,?” she says.

Then she grabs Orisn. He’s gone! Forever and ever, you shall never have him again.

THREE MONTHS LATER

You sneek in2 Orian!s Rc.

“I love you, “ he says.

“Oh yea?!” says Oaye. “I don’t think so!”

She grabs a sock and swings it at you.

You duck, and knock her down. You and Ori. runawat 2 git married. You kiss. On the lils this time!!!!

THE E;ND

Date
Author
Review
2022/09/11
lolkittyking33
[Ch 1] No! Your wrong! You dont even reed before critisizing. Therefore, you are worse!!11

—lol
2022/09/11
Gacha Queen Mel
[Ch 1] if i am then so r u Do you think im blind or hav no eyes or smth i c u being salty because my vid is so much better than your fic
2022/09/11
lolkittyking33
[Ch 1] Its not a POOP PARAGRAPH!!!!! Theres mor to the fic!!! Read the rest first!!!

Ur just a hater!! U suck!

--lol
2022/09/11
Gacha Queen Mel
[Ch 1] This is trash I decided to look at ur fic since u talked crap about mine and its so bad and low effort how can uou even call it a full story it is just a poop paragraph
2022/09/05
lolkittyking3
[Chapter 2] Well, yeah, they’re on OneDrive. I wrote the first story before FfL was FfL. Liechtenstein attacked and Stangest Love got deleted. I never said the second story was PpC at all, its from the Glooming (witch u should totlly reed lol)

Your the lier! JayBird can back me up!

—lol
2022/09/05
Lemony Eggnog
[Chapter 2] If you're going to lie, you should do more research first. If you check the records, I believe you'll find FanficLand didn't exist until 2006. Those 2004 entries are backdated.

Also, by the way, the links to your "old" stories don't even go to FanficLand (or 'World, or 'Verse). They go to OneDrive. You're really not fooling anyone.

--Lemony
2022/09/05
lolkittyking3
[Chapter 2] You should be kicked off FfV. Your not “expressing concern” your, being a CREEP and trying to HARASS me! Admin, please block this creep for trying to get my personal information!

What an uncreative loser you are. Your spelling is traditional and boring, instead of artistic like mine. You are just jealous, bcz you cant do anything but ripoff other fanfic writers with your characters inserted.

Besides, I’ve been here longer! I didn’t see you around in 2004!

—lol, being 1000% righter than Lemony, who isn’t even a Snicket.
2022/09/05
Lemony Eggnog
[Chapter 2] I'm wounded. Express concern for a child's wellbeing, and this is the thanks you get around here. Sheesh.

At least, I assume "51" was a typo and you meant 15. If not, I have a whole different set of concerns...

--Lemony
2022/09/05
lolkittyking3
[Chapter 2] Get a life! You know what? Kissing is mature and if you don’t like that then screw you!!!

I’m 51, FYI and I’m NOT CREEEEPY!!!

Your just a condescending creep. Go AWAY!!

—-lol
2022/09/05
Lemony Eggnog
[Chapter 2] Are you sure you're old enough to be on this site? If you're still giggling about people kissing, I have a serious concern that you are not ready for the Internet. Are you okay? Are your parents at least feeding you, even if they're not making you do your spelling homework?

--Lemony
2022/09/04
lightfairy406
[Ch 1] Write more than a paragraph next time lol.