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| Reviews For: Forsaken By The Sun |
| Honest Critic
10-07-2009 ch 2 | Excuse me while I throw up. That was the most convoluted piece of rubbish I have read YET on this terrible website. English is not a language which capitalises words other than proper nouns and those at the beginning of a sentence. Learn our language properly before you try to use it. |
| Ellintyra Lloysinthayr
10-07-2009 ch 2 | Awww, thats so cute! Im glad she found some happyness and he seemed really cute and dont think you need to apologise for no smut because some people cant write it for some fo their characeters and it was really good anyway! |
| im_tehmarster
04-07-2008 ch 1 | I dunno its kinda poring... its just descirptoin altho its very prety, right mores o sothing happesn plese |
| i pwnz u allz0rs.
02-07-2008 ch 1 |
oh taht ix AWRASOME DUde porst mre son! (PMS lol)
i luv hjow deep i tis. meybe ill try somtime..i meen deepe stuf lol dariikan mite b agnsti to smetyme elerianelel iz kewl1!1@! posr mre!!1!1! |
| x0xpsychOvampierchickx0x
02-07-2008 ch 1 |
Vampiers in the PPC! OMFG taht is such a kewl stroy and i luv ur writng stile - its sooooo gothik 1!!!!1! ellreniael neds to fin a hawt vampier bishie (or a hawt vampier chick lol)i feel so sory forher cos she is so alon :( |
| Lady Cyskia
02-07-2008 ch 1 | ooomg that is SO deep! i just wanna hug her and give er choclates and make it all beter and you amde me CRY!!@!!! |
| kawaiiichisgurl4eva
01-07-2008 ch 1 | omg luv it u shuld write moar abut eleranial (is tat how u spel it0 bcuz shes kawaii and neds a bishie bf vampire to kep her conpanie |
| drrk_ayngel_hez
01-07-2008 ch 1 | wow i luvd it there needs 2 b mor vampyrs in the ppc lol my stories gna be abt vampyrs |
| Ellintiyra Lloysinthayr
01-07-2008 ch 1 | OMG that was like sooo deep. Ellerianniel needs to fidn reel love and I hop she does cos that is soooo sad waht shes been throgh! |