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| Reviews For: Sweat, Blood and Tears |
| Burning Watier
16-07-2009 ch 2 | This is so cool! I hope there will be more action! |
| Ellintyra Lloysinthayr
15-07-2009 ch 2 |
Oh, no!11!! That hacker ruined the whole chapter this time and we only got to see a tiny bit so maybe you should get in contact with the Fanficland mods and see whats going on because its really getting unfair.
But now Im getting worried about whats going to happen to Jyaycacia because you said someones going to die! I hope its not Jaycacia or the SO because theyre just too in love to be broken apart but even if it was Jay Id be sad because she deserves some happiness after living with Acacia. |
| Honest Critic
10-07-2009 ch 1 | This is an excellent story. Except for your author's notes and chapter title. If you are capable of using proper spelling and punctuation throughout your story, you should be able to use it all the time. Never write in numerals and do not EVER use multiple punctuation marks. Other than that, you have done very well. |
| brandywine_baby89
10-07-2009 ch 1 |
Hay, dont b mean! Dat stuff at the end isnt JayBirds fualt, she said that b4. Sum1 is hacking her or something. Stupid hackerz! STFU!
XOXOX |
| brandywine_baby89
10-07-2009 ch 1 |
Yay! UR riting more! This is awsum! ur best yet! rite more!
XOXOX |
| AgafndYou
10-07-2009 ch 1 | OMG!!! I DIDENT BELEEVE IT I M SOOOOO JELUSS OF JAYCACIA N JAY! BUT SHES GONNA DIE ISNT SHE?!?!?!?! OMG WRITE MORE NAOW!!! |
| Lilith Wydenbrooke
10-07-2009 ch 1 | This is a great story! Except the end, where Acacia and Jay got all out of character. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Ellintyra Lloysinthayr
10-07-2009 ch 1 |
Oh, wow! I've been looking forawrds to seeing Jaycacia again because I really think shes one of the best Assassins and I hope everything turns out all right for her cosshe deserves tobe happy after everything taht happened with Acaica.
Please writemore soon because I cant wait! |
| MystikalLuvrrRr
10-07-2009 ch 1 | THIS IS SO EXCITING! I KANNOT WAIT FOR MORE. wow Jaycacia is so kool. th only thig i do not like is u made Acacia evil and then dead, b/c i think she is not evil only misunderstood. But Jaycacia is really cool and i cant wait to hear all about their holiday and the statue and so on. Wut order doyou think the months go? |